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TOEIC Writing: Respond to a Written Request Like a Colleague

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A TOEIC Writing prompt shows an email asking for information or action. A common response ends like this:

"I will follow up with you soon. We will touch base and circle back about the issue. Please wait."

It sounds business-like, but it does not tell the reader what will happen. Who will do the work? What is being delayed? Does soon mean today or next week? The phrases overlap without adding a commitment.

In the current TOEIC Writing format, Respond to a written request asks test takers to write email responses. ETS says there are two such questions and gives ten minutes to read and answer each email. The directions tell you what the response must include. The vocabulary decision is therefore practical: name the next action, its owner, and when the reader will hear back.

The goal is not to pack an email with office idioms. It is to sound like a colleague who understands the request and can manage the next step.

The action-and-return test

Before you finish an email, check four things:

  1. What can I do now?
  2. What must wait, and why?
  3. Whose input or approval do I need?
  4. When and with what information will I return?

The five expressions below answer different parts of that sequence. They are not substitutes for one another.

1. Touch base vs. follow up: brief contact or action after contact?

To touch base is to make brief contact so people can exchange updates or stay aligned.

"Could we touch base on Thursday after the supplier meeting?"

The phrase usually implies a short conversation, not a full investigation or completed task. Natural patterns include touch base with someone and touch base about/on something. It is conversational workplace language.

To follow up means take further action after an earlier message, event, or unresolved matter.

"I'll follow up with the supplier today and send you its revised delivery date."

That sentence promises action. Let's touch base next week promises contact. If a request asks you to confirm a price, touch base alone is too weak unless the contact itself is the next step.

Use these phrases only when their timing and object are clear. I will touch base soon can sound vague. I'll touch base with you at 3 p.m. to confirm the room tells the reader what the contact is for.

2. Circle back vs. get back to: return to a topic or return with an answer?

To circle back is to return later to a topic, person, or unfinished discussion.

"Once Finance confirms the fee, I'll circle back to the catering options."

The expression is useful when a dependency means the discussion cannot be completed now. It does not itself promise a final answer. That is why vague office emails overuse it.

Get back to someone more directly promises a return communication, often with an answer or update.

"I'll check the room schedule and get back to you by noon."

Follow up stresses the action prompted by the earlier exchange. Circle back stresses returning to the matter. Get back to stresses returning to the person with information. In a short exam email, choose the one that makes the commitment clearest.

Do not write circle back again; back already contains the return. Avoid stacking it with follow up unless two separate actions truly exist.

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3. Follow through on vs. follow up on: complete or continue?

To follow through on a promise, plan, or commitment means carry it out to completion.

"I will follow through on the refund request and confirm when the payment has been issued."

To follow up on a matter means take the next action or seek more information after it was raised.

"I will follow up on the refund request with Accounts today."

The second sentence does not claim the refund will be completed today. The first makes a stronger ownership claim.

Use follow through on with something that can be fulfilled: a commitment, action item, recommendation, promise, or agreed plan. It is not a grand synonym for answer. I will follow through on your email is unclear; name the request inside it.

This distinction protects credibility. If another department controls the final outcome, promise the action you control: I'll follow up with Accounts and update you Friday. Do not promise to follow through on an outcome you lack authority to deliver.

4. Hold off on vs. postpone: an intentional temporary pause

To hold off on an action means deliberately wait before doing it, usually because more information, approval, or a better time is expected.

"Please hold off on printing the invitations until I confirm the venue tomorrow."

The pattern is hold off on + noun or -ing form: hold off on payment; hold off on booking. The pause is temporary and purposeful.

Postpone means move an arranged event or action to a later time. It is more neutral and formal. Delay may be intentional or caused by a problem. Hold off on highlights a choice not to act yet.

That choice needs a reason or release condition. Hold off on the order may sound arbitrary. Hold off on the order until Procurement approves the new total gives the reader a clear boundary.

Do not use this phrase when the action has already been cancelled. Holding off leaves it open. Also avoid using it as a polite cover for refusing a request. If you cannot do something, state that directly.

5. Run something by someone vs. inform them: seek input first

To run something by someone is to show or explain an idea, draft, or plan to that person so they can react before it is final.

"I'll run the revised schedule by my manager this afternoon."

The phrase can involve feedback, agreement, or informal approval, depending on context. It does not guarantee formal authorization. If a policy requires official approval, use exact language: submit the request for approval.

Tell or inform simply passes information. Run by invites a response before proceeding. Check with is broader and may mean ask for facts, permission, or confirmation.

Grammar matters: run something by someone. I will run by my manager the schedule is possible in rare structures but unnatural here. Keep the object after run: run the schedule by my manager.

This phrase is conversational. It fits many colleague-to-colleague emails. In a formal notice, seek approval for or request feedback on is safer.

Weak vs. colleague-like: the same request

Prompt: A coworker asks whether she can reserve the large meeting room for a client event next Thursday and whether catering is available.

Weak version:

"Dear Ms. Lee, Thank you for your email. I will follow up and circle back soon. Please hold off. I will touch base with people and follow through. Best regards."

The reply contains five workplace expressions but answers nothing. People is vague. Please hold off does not name the action or reason. No date anchors the promise.

More precise version:

"Dear Ms. Lee,

The large room is currently free next Thursday, but the reservation is not final. Please hold off on inviting the client until I confirm the building schedule tomorrow morning. I will also run your catering request by Facilities and get back to you with the menu and price by 2 p.m. If you are available, we can touch base for ten minutes after that to choose an option.

Best regards, Alex"

The stronger version separates each move:

  • hold off on inviting names the paused action;
  • until I confirm gives the release condition;
  • run your request by Facilities names the needed input;
  • get back to you ... by 2 p.m. makes a return commitment;
  • touch base for ten minutes proposes a brief contact with a purpose.

When plain words are better

Workplace expressions are useful only when they sharpen the action. Often a plain verb is clearer:

  • I'll ask Facilities instead of I'll touch base with the relevant stakeholders.
  • Please wait to order instead of Please hold off on moving forward with the procurement activity.
  • I'll reply by Friday instead of I'll circle back in due course.

Advanced vocabulary includes the judgment not to use an idiom when a plain verb carries the commitment better.

Common mistakes

  • Treating all return phrases as synonyms. Touch base means brief contact; circle back means return to a matter; get back to someone promises a return message.
  • Writing follow through when you control only the next inquiry. Promise follow-up, not an outcome another team owns.
  • Using hold off on without naming the action or condition. Say what must wait and until when.
  • Using run by to claim formal approval. It usually means seek a reaction before proceeding.
  • Omitting the person in run something by someone. Name whose input you need.
  • Adding office language without an owner or time. A precise commitment needs both.

Quick check

1. You will ask another department for information after receiving an email. Which phrase fits?

A. Follow up with the department. B. Follow through on the final outcome. C. Hold off the department.

2. You want a coworker's feedback on a draft before sending it. What should you do?

A. Run the draft by the coworker. B. Circle the coworker back. C. Follow through the coworker.

3. Which sentence creates a clear temporary pause?

A. "Hold off soon." B. "Hold off on booking until the client confirms the date." C. "Postpone maybe."

Answers: 1-A, 2-A, 3-B. Following up names the next action. Running a draft by someone seeks input before it is final. Holding off needs both the delayed action and a useful boundary.

Practice prompt

Respond to a colleague who asks you to approve a training venue and pay the deposit today. You need your manager's view on the price, and the venue will keep the booking open until Friday.

Write an email of 90–120 words. Use hold off on for the temporary pause, run something by someone for the internal check, and either get back to, follow up, or touch base for a dated return. Do not use two phrases where one plain verb is clearer.

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