A strong CELPIP Writing Task 1 email makes its purpose visible. A request asks the recipient to take or consider an action; a complaint documents a problem and usually seeks a response or resolution. Both can be firm without becoming hostile.
Vocabulary is one official CELPIP Writing performance dimension. Register and word choice matter alongside content/coherence, readability, and task fulfillment; no template guarantees a level. Use the CELPIP vocabulary hub and Exam English hub.
Open with purpose and context
- request: “I am writing to request a change to my booking on 4 October.”
- complaint: “I am writing regarding two unexplained charges on invoice 184.”
- combined: “I am writing to report a repeated delivery problem and request a revised delivery date.”
Avoid an empty I am writing this email to inform you that I have a complaint. Name the issue.
Describe evidence before judgment
“The confirmation listed a 3 p.m. arrival, but the delivery arrived at 7:20 p.m. and no update was sent.”
This is more persuasive than Your service was absolutely terrible. Use however, despite, as a result, and consequently only when their logical relationship is accurate.
Make a proportionate request
- “Could you confirm the corrected date by Friday?”
- “I would appreciate a review of the duplicate charge.”
- “A practical resolution would be...”
- “If that option is unavailable, please let me know whether...”
Demand and immediately may be justified in some fictional prompts but often make the register unnecessarily aggressive.
Mini email
Dear Building Manager,
I am writing regarding the laundry-room booking system. My reservation disappeared twice this week, although both confirmations remained in my email. As a result, I could not use the room at either scheduled time. Could you review the two booking references and restore the fee charged for the unused sessions? I would also appreciate confirmation that future reservations will remain visible. If a technical review will take longer, please tell me when I can expect an update.
Kind regards, Samir Patel
The email separates facts, impact, requests, and fallback. For the wider task, read CELPIP Writing Task 1 email vocabulary.
Choose the email’s controlling purpose
Before drafting, complete this sentence: “I want the recipient to understand ___ and do ___.” A complaint needs an outcome, and a request needs context. Group several issues under one purpose.
Use request for an action, inquire for information, report for a problem, and follow up when earlier contact matters. Advise often means give guidance, while inform means provide facts. “Please advise whether the booking can be moved” requests guidance; “Please inform the team of the new date” asks the recipient to notify others.
Document a clean evidence chain
Separate expectation, event, and impact:
- expectation: “The agreement states that heating is included.”
- event: “The unit had no heat on 6 and 7 January.”
- impact: “Consequently, I had to arrange temporary accommodation.”
Only claim evidence you possess in the fictional scenario. According to the confirmation attributes a fact. My records show indicates documentation. Do not invent photographs, reference numbers, prior calls, or policy clauses absent from your created scenario merely to make the complaint sound official.
Despite takes a noun phrase or gerund: “Despite the confirmation,” or “Despite receiving confirmation.” Although takes a clause: “Although I received confirmation, the booking was missing.” Therefore introduces a result; however introduces contrast.
Select a proportionate remedy
Match the solution to the problem. A duplicated charge supports review and reimbursement of that charge. A delayed reply may support a status update and deadline, not automatically full compensation. Useful verbs include review, correct, replace, reimburse, reschedule, confirm, and clarify.
Build priority and fallback: “I would prefer a replacement by Tuesday. If stock is unavailable, please refund the purchase price.” This is clearer than stacking three incompatible demands. Set a deadline only when the scenario makes it reasonable, and explain it: “Please confirm by Thursday because the event takes place on Friday.”
Control register
Firm language names obligations and outcomes without attacking character. “The service did not match the confirmed booking” is specific. “Your company is dishonest” alleges motive. Avoid sarcasm, capital letters for emphasis, and repeated exclamation marks.
Original worked email: course schedule change
Prompt: You registered for a weekend course, but the provider moved two sessions to weekday afternoons. Write to explain the problem and request a solution.
Dear Program Coordinator,
I am writing regarding the schedule change for the digital-design course beginning 12 November. When I registered, the confirmation listed all six sessions on Saturdays. The updated timetable now places the second and fourth sessions on Tuesday afternoons.
I work during those hours and cannot attend either weekday session. As a result, I would miss two linked workshops even though I enrolled on the basis of the weekend schedule. I understand that occasional changes may be necessary; however, these times alter a central condition of the booking.
Could you move me to a group that completes all sessions on weekends? If no such group is available this term, I would appreciate a transfer to the next weekend intake without an additional fee. Please confirm the available option by 5 November so that I can adjust my work and travel arrangements.
Kind regards, Elena Morris
The email does not exaggerate the inconvenience or assign blame. It cites the relevant difference, explains the concrete effect, offers a preferred resolution and fallback, and ties the response date to planning needs.
Controlled practice
1. Select the connector
- “____ receiving a confirmation, I was not on the guest list.” (Despite / Although)
- “____ I received a confirmation, I was not on the guest list.” (Despite / Although)
- “The parcel arrived after the event; ____, it was no longer useful.” (therefore / however)
Answers: 1. Despite, followed by a gerund phrase. 2. Although, followed by a clause. 3. therefore, because lack of usefulness is the result.
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Start a practice session →2. Match remedy to issue
Match: duplicated fee; defective zipper; unavailable booked date. Remedies: correct the invoice, replace or repair the bag, reschedule the booking.
Answer: duplicated fee → correct invoice; defective zipper → replace or repair bag; unavailable date → reschedule booking. Each remedy directly addresses its problem.
3. Repair the register
Aggressive: “Fix your ridiculous mistake immediately!”
Model answer: “Could you correct the billing error and send a revised statement by Friday?” It specifies action and a measurable outcome without insulting the recipient.
4. Distinguish refund and reimbursement
The store returns the price of a cancelled order: refund. The company repays a taxi fare caused by its error: reimbursement. The distinction is between returning the original payment and repaying a separate expense.
5. Find the missing link
“The room was unavailable. I request a fee review.” Add the impact that justifies the request.
Model answer: “The room was unavailable, so I could not use the two-hour booking I had paid for. I therefore request a review and refund of that session fee.”
6. Order the email body
Answer: purpose/context → evidence → impact → requested remedy → fallback or response request. This progression lets the recipient understand and act without searching for the main point.
Match the register to the recipient
Register is a relationship decision, not a switch between “formal words” and “simple words.” A building manager you do not know may receive Could you review the attached reference? A colleague may receive Could you take a look at the reference? Both are polite; the phrasal verb is more conversational.
Avoid inflated wording such as I hereby demand the rectification of the aforementioned issue. It consumes space and can obscure the action. Please correct the duplicate charge is clearer.
Separate four message functions
- context: identify the booking, event, or interaction;
- problem: state the discrepancy precisely;
- impact: explain what the discrepancy prevented or caused;
- resolution: request a proportionate action and response time.
Do not confuse impact with emotion. I was extremely furious reports emotion; I had to pay for another journey shows consequence. A concise emotional sentence can support tone, but evidence makes the request persuasive.
Request versus complaint models
Request:
“I am registered for the 4 October workshop. A work commitment now ends at noon, so I am writing to ask whether my registration can be moved to the afternoon session. If space is available, please confirm the change by Wednesday.”
Complaint:
“My receipt shows two charges for order 281, although I made one purchase. I reported the duplicate charge on Monday but have not received an update. Please review both transaction references and tell me when I can expect a decision.”
The request explains a changed circumstance. The complaint establishes discrepancy and prior contact. Neither relies on insult or threat.
Cohesion without a connector chain
Each paragraph should have a job. You do not need firstly, secondly, moreover, furthermore, and in conclusion in a short email. Pronoun reference, repeated key nouns, and logical order also create cohesion.
Be careful with therefore: the requested action must follow from the evidence. The delivery was late; therefore, refund every purchase I made this year is disproportionate.
Controlled editing
1. Best opening: A. “Hey, you messed up.” B. “I am writing regarding a duplicate charge on invoice 184.” C. “This email is an email.” Answer: B. It states the topic and maintains a professional register.
2. Best evidence: A. “Your service is the worst.” B. “The confirmation showed Tuesday, while the reminder showed Thursday.” C. “Everybody knows you are wrong.” Answer: B. It identifies a verifiable discrepancy.
3. Best fallback: A. “Fix it now or else.” B. “If a replacement is unavailable, could you confirm whether a refund is possible?” C. “Do anything.” Answer: B. It offers a specific alternative without assuming entitlement beyond the prompt.
Revision pass
Underline every request verb: confirm, review, replace, explain, refund. Check that each has a clear object and that the prompt supports it. Box dates, reference numbers, and stated impacts. Delete adjectives that merely intensify anger. Finally, read the email as the recipient: can they identify the issue and requested action in under twenty seconds?
Soften requests without making them vague
Compare three levels:
- direct: “Please confirm the revised date.”
- conventionally polite: “Could you confirm the revised date?”
- conditional: “If the change has been approved, could you confirm the revised date?”
The conditional version fits when approval remains uncertain. Avoid excessive embedding: I was wondering if perhaps it might be possible for you to consider confirming... A courteous modal and please are enough.
Document prior contact
When a complaint involves repeated contact, give status rather than emotion:
“I reported the issue through the online form on 12 September and received reference 451. I have not yet received the promised update.”
This supports a follow-up request. Do not write You ignored me unless the prompt truly establishes deliberate behavior; lack of response does not prove intention.
Full practice email
Prompt: Your recreation course was moved to a time you cannot attend. Write to the coordinator, explain the impact, and request a solution.
Dear Course Coordinator,
I am writing regarding the photography course originally scheduled for Wednesday evenings. Yesterday’s notice moved all sessions to Friday afternoons. Unfortunately, I work until 5 p.m. on Fridays, so I would be unable to attend any of the revised sessions.
I registered because the Wednesday schedule was compatible with my work hours and paid the full fee last week. Could you transfer my registration to another evening group? If no evening group is available, I would appreciate information about a credit or refund. Please let me know which options are available before the first revised class on 2 October.
Kind regards, Lina Moretti
The writer is firm about the impact, gives relevant chronology, and offers two proportionate resolutions.
Editing rationales
“I want compensation for this disaster.” The noun disaster overstates an administrative change, and compensation is vague. Name the action supported by the prompt.
“You always change everything.” Always is an unsupported frequency claim. Give the specific date and change.
“Kindly do the needful.” This formula may be familiar in some varieties of professional English but is less precise than a named request. State what the recipient should review or confirm.
Final mechanical check
Verify recipient, greeting, purpose, every bullet in the prompt, paragraph breaks, closing, and name. Then search for pronouns with unclear references. If this, it, or they could refer to two things, repeat the noun. Correct clarity before adding vocabulary variety.
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